Strengths: Argument and Presentation
q Clear thesis.
q Paper is logical and convincing, i.e., Solid reasoning throughout.
q Good introduction, i.e., Interesting and anticipates argument.
q Good conclusion, i.e., Effectively summarizes argument.
q Well organized.
q Plentiful and well-chosen evidence supports thesis.
q Good grasp of key issues.
q Addressed all aspects of the question.
Weaknesses: Argument
q Essay lacks a clear, specific thesis.
q Arguments are unclear or incomplete.
q Arguments are not substantiated with sufficient evidence.
q Too many facts, citations or quotations without analysis.
q Factual errors.
q Misused key terms or concepts.
Weaknesses: Presentation
q Weak paragraphing, e.g., Unrelated ideas are strung together.
q Paper is poorly organized and does not follow a clear outline.
q No/weak introduction.
q No/weak conclusion.
q Insufficient attribution, i.e., Sources are used without proper citations.
q Grammatical and/or spelling errors.
q Partially or mostly incoherent.
Advice
q Always proofread or have someone proofread your work.
q Prepare an outline before you begin to write.
q Read the question carefully and address all parts of the question.
q Spend more time preparing your answer; use lectures/books.
q For future assignments, seek the assistance of the Writing Center.
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